I haven’t given up, on all of it
I still have hope, faith
Maybe I’ll find someone like you
A pretty girl
Someone, who looks like you
Someone, with that same sense of humor
That dark side; that evil, girly smile
The one who laughs when people fall down
When they fail
The same girl who
I can share easy thoughts
Feel good
And still feel good about
Being alone
Either way
I still miss you
And everything is still good, up here
Scratch, what I said
About finding someone like you
I misspoke
© Dicky J Loweman 2015
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It doesn’t describe anyone in particular. Just a pretty girl with a sense of humor and a dark side. It could be anyone. So it gives readers (females) a sense that it could be them. Nothing wrong with that.
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I like your take on that, because is could be.
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Sorry to make you nervous about that!
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Keeps me on my toes.
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Well, then, I’m glad to oblige. Nice look.
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All u can day is this: Don’t give up.
Though I like how you let your female audience picture themselves in this one. Very flattering.
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I’m glad you liked it, but I’m not sure what you meant about the female audience. I’m a little nervous of your answer, but I want to hear it. Just for the record, this wasn’t writen with anyone’s demise in mind. Can’t wait for your reply. Cheers!
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This is a nice one. But don’t give up, and I say this to myself as well. Much to my dismay I now realize just how few people I am actually compatable with. It’s something I’ve always known but have tried to deny. I’ve made a few men rather miserable along the way which was never my intent. In so many ways I demand so little, but in other ways I demand so much. Things most people cannot give. But I will learn to find contentness in my loneliness again…By the way happy St. Patricks day. Go have yourself some fun, laugh at some drunk when they fall…wait that will probably be me.
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Thanks, and Happy St. Pat’s to you, too. I make it a point NOT to go out on this day, at least to the bars. But I do enjoy it.
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No bars for me tonight, although I do love an Irish bar on St Paddy’s day. I’ll just be hanging out at a friend’s drinking green beer and subjecting them to some obnoxious Irish punk music.
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Perhaps a little Flogging Molly or Dropkick Murphys?
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There you go. I’m always up for some flogging and drop kicking.
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Catch them live, if you can. Good times.
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I have no doubt
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